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There were a lot of happy people on Friday night when the Cubs beat the Cards 5 to 3. If you were just coming into the bar you really wouldn't know why everyone was cheering for. Or if you don't really fallow baseball and aren't a live and know when a big game like the Cubs and Cards series that someone wrong with you. When the Cubs defeated the Cards there was a lot of beer spilt on the floor because they were excited that the Cubs won.